Nice one, thanks! It has an interesting rhythm and message.
Don't know much about poems, and prefer concrete and simple over abstract and mysterious, but trying to appreciate them more. I do like to write empowering rhymes/mantras/poems/raps, and my favorite poem is Invictus -- "I am the master of my fate, I am the captain of my soul".
Nice one, thanks! It has an interesting rhythm and message.
Don't know much about poems, and prefer concrete and simple over abstract and mysterious, but trying to appreciate them more. I do like to write empowering rhymes/mantras/poems/raps, and my favorite poem is Invictus -- "I am the master of my fate, I am the captain of my soul".
I love poems; I guess it's not for me then (lol)! This poem is about life; simple and beautiful! I love Tagore
Thanks for sharing this :)